Interesting story and color pallet which match the theme and mood here. Do you plan on releasing this mlp comic regularly? I've read a number of potentially great mlp comics which seem to have stopped mid way, or get a page out so sparsely people loose interest.
This is why I can't trust a suit. Acts like he knows everything, but put him in your shoes, and you'll get more whining than you would of Rarity in a mud wrestling pit wearing a green beehive(hairstyle).